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Affliction going hardcore
The scene starts twelve years ago in Prison in New Jersey. This takes place when the hardcore life of Affliction when he was locked up. It shows a jail cell it is very dark and murky inside but we can see a person in an orange jump suit. He is looking down at the ground and then slowly lifts his head up and it shows Affliction when he was eighteen. It shows with his arms crossed and him having an emotionless face. Then we here a voice probably a security guard calling his name.
-Prison Guard- Trey Jackson…
Affliction looks at the guard and then slowly makes it from sitting from a bench to standing up. The 12x12 cell opens and then we see the guard take Affliction’s hands and handcuffs him. He then somewhat shoves Affliction out and then moves him out. He then begins to talk to the prisoner.
-Prison Guard- You look new are you?
Affliction doesn’t answer so the prison guard looks real stupid for talking to him. Then there is an awkward silence and then we here Affliction mutter something.
-Affliction- Yes I am…
The prison then takes a long time to answer but then comes up for the right words to say. He then slowly begins to talk to Affliction.
-Prison Guard- Well your going to have one hell of a time here. Good luck.
Then we see the prison guard unhook his handcuffs and then opens a door and lets Affliction go outside. Affliction then sees hundreds of prisoners outside playing. Affliction swallows his throat and then we here the prison guard say something to him.
-Prison Guard- You got one hour make the most of it.
Affliction then nods his head and then we see the prison guard close the metal door. Affliction then walks on and then sees a bench where a man sits and decides it’s a good place. The man who looks like he has been here for a while looks puzzled as to why this guy decides to sit by him but Affliction looks to be ignoring him. Then the man then decides to say something to Affliction trying to strike up a conversation.
-Corey Hill- So what are you in for?
Affliction turns his head and then raises his eyebrow and then the man looked dumb for asking but Affliction answered.
-Affliction- Grand Theft.
The man then nods his head and then begins to talk to Affliction again.
-Corey Hill- I am here Drug Possession. I’m here twenty years…
Affliction looks like he wasn’t even paying attention but he decides to talk back.
-Affliction- My name is Trey. I’m here for five…
-Corey Hill- Damn you luck man there are people that come here when there like eighteen and come out when they reach ninety. You should really consider yourself luck.
Then we here a faint scream probably a prison guard. We here him say time up. Then we see Affliction and Corey stand up and walk towards to door. Then we see another guy walk up behind Affliction and Corey. He is very overweight and has braids. He then looks at Affliction and looks puzzled and confused as to who he is. Corey acknowledges him and then smiles and then begins to talk.
-Corey Hill- Ah man what’s up man? This is Trey he’s new here. He he for Grand Theft and only here for like five years…
The man then smiles and then begins to talk to Affliction.
-Darrel Kagor- Yo what’s good? I’m Darrel. I’m here fifty f*****g years for armed robbery.
Affliction nods his head and then waves at him. Then as they approach the door they are handcuffed and then sent back to there cell. The same prison guard who took him out puts him back in. They make it to a abandoned hallway until they make it to his cell. The prison guard then begins to talk to Affliction.
-Security Guard- Well here you go Mr. Jackson. Good Night…
The second scene takes place the next day Thursday and we see Affliction in the cafeteria. He is sitting a lone eating his breakfast. Darrel Kagor and Corey Hill then greet him and Affliction looks somewhat happy to see them. Darrel is the first person to start the conversation. He then begins to talk.
-Darrel Kagor- Trey man what’s good? How did you sleep last night? Must been hard considering it was your first night and all.
Corey Hill makes a little chuckle followed by Affliction. Corey Hill is the first person to talk after. It takes awhile for him to stop laughing but he continues.
-Corey Hill- Man don’t mind Darrel he been here twenty I think he’s gotten caught up in the jail life. So guess what I got for you guys? Got it in mail the other day. Surprised them fuckers didn’t check it. So who want to see this?
Affliction and Darrel are curious to what it is. Corey makes a wide grin and then looks to see if any guards are looking. Then we see him pull out a bag of cocaine. Affliction’s eyes widen, as he knows something bad is going to happen. Darrel is laughing his ass off as he sees it while Affliction looks down at the ground really worried of getting busted.
-Darrel Kagor- That’s sticking it to the man! What do you plan on doing with that sh*t anyway? You can’t smoke it here man that’s impossible.
Corey makes a huge burst of laughter and then begins to address Darrel’s question.
-Corey Hill- Man what the f**k? Stop being stupid course I ain’t gonna smoke this. I am going to do what I do best and that is sell. I can probably get fifty for this right here.
Darrel’s eyes widen and then he has a mischievous smile on his face and has something planned bad to do. Affliction then sits there completely silent. Corey then begins to talk again this time to Affliction.
-Corey Hill- Trey what you gotta say bout this?
-Affliction- Uhhh… cool I guess? Aren’t you scared of getting caught? If anyone catches you with that then you get more years added on.
Corey and Darrel both laugh.
-Corey Hill- The only problem is we won’t get caught. You worry too much Trey no one will get caught these guards suck these days.
Then we here the familiar scream from the security guards flooded the room. Hundreds of prisoners get up and empty there trash and get then get handcuffed. Affliction is then put into his cell. Many hours passed and then we see a different security guard come up and call Affliction’s name. Affliction immediately stands up and then the security guard opens his cell and the security guard begins to talk to him.
-Prison Guard 2- We may be wondering what’s going on…sadly all I can tell you that the warden wants to get to know you. Plus you might know what’s going on…
Affliction swallows his throat as he is being handcuffed. After they make there way out five minutes later we see a door that says, “Carl Lopez” apparently the wardens name. The door opens and then we see a very extravagant office. Then we see a Latino man dressed in a black suit sitting in a black rolling chair. Affliction is sat down and the security guard stands by the door. Then the warden stands up and starts to smile and talk.
-Carl Lopez- Well…well…Mr. Jackson. Here for a five-year sentence for grand theft. I must say its not looking good for you I mean your life is complete fail. The day you graduated high school you were offered to play basketball at UCLA then we were busted and now you’re here. I mean you really f****d up here…the way you save your ass is to tell us something.
Affliction looks down at the ground and then looks up at the man who has a serious face. Then Affliction starts to slowly talk to Mr. Lopez.
-Affliction- What do you want?
Mr. Lopez makes a smirk and then a little chuckle and then begins to talk.
-Carl Lopez- Well Mr. Jackson you have got quite a mouth on you. Well here it is. This morning there were rumors of cocaine being smuggled into my jail. People say they saw you with it…others then say they saw another man your race with it. Which is true Jackson? If you tell use now you get two years off your sentence if you don’t well…you get another five years. That would make your life even more a living hell then it already is. You wouldn’t want that would you?
Affliction starts to breath heavy and Mr. Lopez stands back and then stands on his desk. He then gets up after awhile because of Affliction’s refusal not to answer. Then we see Mr. Lopez talk again.
-Carl Lopez- Well you going to answer or ruin your life…again?
Affliction looks down on the ground and Mr. Lopez just stands there after awhile. After a few minutes tired of waiting, Mr. Lopez starts to get impatient and then slaps Affliction square in the face. Affliction eyes get wider and then he stands up and goes after Affliction but the guard goes after him and holds him back. Affliction then starts to raise his voice at Lopez.
-Affliction- Do I look like a f*****g snitch? Hell no. You can shove it right up your ass you stupid ass. If you want it so bad fine. Just fine. You stupid bitch. It was Hill. Corey Hill.
Mr. Lopez with a wide grin then goes over to Affliction and then begins to talk.
-Carl Lopez- Well thank you Mr. Jackson you’ve been a real help…
The security guard then gets Affliction up then they exit out the door. The scene then ends with Affliction staring viciously into the eyes of the security guard and the security guard just smiling. A new scene begins outside where Affliction is sitting a lone and then we see Darrel come along. Darrel doesn’t sit but stands up. Affliction the looks up and sees Darrel with a pissed off look on his face. Darrel then begins to talk to him and talks in a raised voice.
-Darrel Kagor- Man you’re a snitch I should kick your punk ass right here. You going to have a bad f*****g rep here now everyone knows you have a bad rep knowing you are a bitch snitch.
Affliction then stands up and starts to breathe heavy. Darrel doesn’t look at all intimidated. Then we see Darrel shove Affliction. Then Darrel begins to talk.
-Darrel Kagor- You really want to f**k with someone like me? I dare you to do something. C’mon hit me! Hit me! C’mon…
Affliction and Darrel are nose to nose then we see Affliction punch Darrel in the face and then shoves him across the fence and then grinds his face against the fence until his forehead begins to bleed. Then we see Darrel shove back then Affliction punches him again till he is on the floor. Then we Affliction up up on the fence and yank off some barbed wire. He wraps it around his hand and then goes down and starts punching Darrel crazy in the face. Then we see the other prisoners saw and they go other and start to chant “fight”. Then several securities backs up and gets Affliction off and get Darrel up. Then we here Darrel shout something at the top of his lungs.
-Darrel Kagor- You going to regret this!
Both men are then escorted out and then put back in their cell ending the scene. The last scene then takes place in the cafeteria where Affliction is sitting by himself. Then there is a group of people are sitting there looking fiercely at Affliction and that group includes Corey Hill and the crippled and bandaged Darrel Kagor. Then we see the group come over and then the whole room gets immediately quite. Affliction then looks up and then raises his head and then begins to talk.
-Affliction- What the f**k do you want?
The group then begins to laugh and then when they stop we see Corey through Affliction’s trey across the room and food goes flying. Affliction ignores it and then we see Darrel talk smack.
-Darrel Kagor- So Trey long time no see I see your beat up after the punishment I gave you.
-Affliction- Oh really? I suppose the bandage on your head means nothing? It means something to me though it means I kicked your ass and you know it.
Darrel then stands up and then picks a chair and throws it across the wall. Affliction smiles and then we see Darrel slap him and Affliction slowly stands up then we see Corey low blow him and pushes him into one of the guys in the group so the guy in the group pushes him into Darrel and Darrel throws him against the wall and bounces his head several times against the wall. Then we see Darrel go to someone’s table and grabs a drink and pours it over Affliction. Affliction then comes in and counters with a punch to Darrel then we see Corey come in with a punch but Affliction counters it and throws him into the wall hits a huge boot on him. Darrel comes back with a chair but Affliction sees it at the last second and then powerfully grabs the chair and beats Darrel repeatedly with it and then Corey. The group stands back as Affliction continues and then flees when guards come. The last scene ends with Affliction looking at the knocked bodies of Darrel Kogar and Corey Hill. After that Affliction’s sentence was shortened due to good behavior and was released December 23, 2005. Since then he has had the self-discipline and trained under MMA. He then entered wrestling and people have doubted Affliction’s talent and emotion. After revealing his story people will have a different view on Trey Jackson or Affliction. Monday he will enter a match with many other superstars included and he will prove he is just as hardcore as anyone else in there. Monday the monster that was has been held in ever since his jail years will be released on everyone in that match.
Oh so you didn't know?
Part two begins in a dark alley probably past 10. We then see Affliction walk up dressed in a black leather jacket and baggy ble jeans. He has a wide grin on his face as he reveals himself. He then suddenly begins to talk but very monotone.
-Affliction- Well I’m sure none of you saw this coming. You all probably thought man I had one match but let me just tell you your all-dead wrong. Apparently there the interm GM booked a match to “spice” things up around here. All non-champions can enter so I thought meh why not. Could give me a chance to both bring gold to Death Row and make a name for myself.
Affliction makes a slight smirk and then quickly begins to speak again.
-Affliction- Yah you’re damn right I am going the Hardcore Championship home to the Death Row. I will then go on to bring a name for not only Death Row but also myself. Ever since I debuted a lot of people have doubted that I have what it takes to be a wrestler and a credible champion. This match is my time to shine and no one I repeat no one will take my light.
Affliction makes a evil smile and then swallows his throat. He then looks at the cold and dark wet street ground and then looks up and begins to talk again.
-Affliction- To all my opponents I really wish you the best of luck because once you get in the ring with someone like me all your going to need is luck.
Affliction then nods his head and starts to shake it showing his cockyness. He then makes a signal at his waist showing he is out for the title and then starts to again.This time he talks in a bit more serious voice.
Affliction- Monday won't be just a match it will be a defining moment in my career. Everyone in that arena will say to there self "Man that Affliction is a hell of a combatant and this guy will be a force to be reckned with". After I win that title I guarantee you there will be no one that will stop me...not Cameron Hayden, not Khwame Myles, not even Chad Jennings. So another message to my oppenents if you get in my way every last one of you will wake in a hospital bed.
Affliction starts to make an evil laugh and then slowly turns around leaving the scene thus ending the scene.
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